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Just me and Frosty chilling out as he wanted. xD Not sure if that's what you had in mind, But it's something. :3
But yeah isn't it cool that I've been arting alot lately? I hope to stay like this. I'm not sure what, but something or someone got me wanting to draw again. To go for my dreams... I want to be a great artist. I mean seeing all the great and amazing arts from my friends and others is just sooo cool. I want to be like you guys. I want to get better! And I'm willing to do anything to get that dream come true. ^^ I have to admit... I may be lazy, But I LOVE drawing. Maybe even more then gaming now... I mean since I got into drawing, I've been playing less games. o.O Odd eh? I guess I'm changing... and thanks to a really good friend of mine, I learned that given up on your dreams will get you no where. And it's true. So I'm not given up. I'm gonna keep trying!

Now since I want to get better, I'm not sure if this is good enough or if any art can be Critiques. But I'm gonna ask if people can kindly Critiques this. I want to notice all the mistakes and improve the best I can. And don't worry I won't be offenced of what you say. I'm asking for this.
But don't go and say something like this: "This art sucks your better off not arting at all!" or "stop sucking or stop arting at all!" Because those are not Critiques. If I get anything like that your blocked and the comment is marked as spam. Thank you. But if it's notting like that then please by all means speak your mind out. C:

But yeah. Enjoy anyways. ^^ I still have some ideas to do on drawings too. And if you want you can give me more ideas if you want. Anyone can. I would be very grateful. Comment and fave please. :)
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

First of all when i saw this, I couldn't stop laughing xD
I know exactly whats happening here, and so that gives this piece a higher vision. Incorporating the <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.com/avatars/i/m/i…" alt=":iconimhappyplz:" title="imhappyplz"/> face and the <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.com/avatars/w/t/w…" alt=":iconwthplz:" title="wthplz"/> face only makes you more of a winner.

It's very original, more so on the joke and use of those faces. I love the poses you've chosen also <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

As far as technique goes, I can see you've done very well with the tools you have. I know you only have a mouse to use with MS Paint, correct? You've managed to overcome that handicap and still create a decent piece of art.
However, in some areas, you may have wanted to use more of the tools provided on Paint. Such as the line tool when you created the checkerboard, or the curve tool when you made he slope of the tails curling around.
For shading, it seems okay in shadow placement, a little confusing at some parts but good overall. However the shading is a little bit shallow in some areas, you may want to go darker on your shadows, to create more depth. Have balance <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> Some slight anatomy tweaking to do, but its mostly personal preference in the end anyway.

This piece has a higher impact with the audience you have directed it at <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" title="XD" /> because I think most everyone who watches you knows who these two are, and the joke here combined with the faces makes me chuckle.

Overall, for the audience you directed at, you've created a charming and amusing piece <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> Keep it up~